It’s great. I think it’s a pity (but I know I am nitpicking here) that you say “There is no ethical consumption under capitalism” as if it were an accepted fact.

But then again your conclusion says “animal liberation doesn’t exist in a vacuum, and can’t be won without an explicitly anticapitalist, antispeciesist political agenda where white supremacy, heteropatriarchy, colonization and the violence of the carceral state are stripped of their power.” so you are clearly demanding that veganism and anti-capitalist be linked. Yet are you not also saying that we should accept that there are nuances and different interpretations when it comes to veganism? I think that your conclusion goes against this.